Free Write Friday

Here is a response to Kellie Elmores Free Write Friday-  Thank you Kellie for all the inspiration!

http://magicinthebackyard.wordpress.com/category/free-write-friday/

Absorption:

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Hair is messy, the way it should be.

The sky is gray but a gaze will penetrate any cloud.

Lovers left behind- they cannot reach a moment of selfish absorption.

That is always good.

Communion is found in the abstract,

the stars are far beyond a cloudy day or city lights.

What would she do with a mountain, or open ocean?

I wonder, how would she get there?

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6 thoughts on “Free Write Friday

  1. “communion is found in the abstract the stars are far beyond a cloudy day or city lights. ”
    Yes! Great verse! Thanks so much for contributing! :) big hugs!

    Ps…would u mind including a link back to free write friday in your post? Thanks a bunch!

    Hope to see u next weekend!

    Kellie

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    • Done, Kellie. Once again, thank you for the inspiration. The japanese fairy tale actually got me writing fiction again. Havent done anything like that in prolly 15 years. Never a ghost story lol. That was a ton of fun!

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